Sela Locke

The mere idea of understanding this gives me a headache. Not only does the grammar make Aunt Josephine want to jump out The Wide Window, but such a plot I've ...

You people are wa-a-a-a-a-a-ay too nice! -blush- Yeah, I'm trying to get the third chapter on; it needs some serious editing. Thanks for the encouragement! -SELA P.S. Thailijah, when're we ...

Next installment! Any and all reviews appreciated, although I don't, as I said before, need nitpicking so much as comments on the story itself. ;) “Maria! Mariadelle !” called Mother, ...

Thankies, y'all! I certainly am grateful for all the reviews. The next part should be on relatively soon... I hope. I have to write a short story for Lit. class, ...

I agree with Becki, you gave away a lot for just a prologue, not to mention a short one. I think the whole idea of angels falling in love is ...

Firstly, I want to point out that every single bit of dialogue doesn't need to be tagged. Lemme show you what I mean: “Tayla told me. I’m her younger brother, ...

I think the people above me have gotten most of the nitpicks, and if they haven't, you should be able to, with a read-over or two. The lack of commas, ...

I started this on a whim after watching the Disney version of 'Cinderella' again. I certainly appreciate any and all reviews, although I don't need nitpicks so much as advice. ...

Hey tharr, reviewer Sela, reportin' fer duty. I must warn you I don't like to nitpick, so if you're looking for a lot of grammar mistakes pointed out, you're not ...

It was okay, if there wasn't supposed to be much action or plot or point. The writing was good, and I'd nitpick on the grammar, but other's'll get to that, ...

Wow, I can't believe you actually liked it. I was afraid, with the way you were acting last night, that you would be all, "IT'S SO HORRIBLE AND FAST-PACED. STUPIDSTUPIDSTUPIDFACEPIGWORLDDUMMIE!!!" ...

Anyways, here we go for the third time. You'll enjoy it, yes? -chuckles evilly- You'd better. The sandwich shop was surprisingly unsightly, and Allen wondered how such a small area ...

I'm sure my fellow reviewers have nitpicked enough, so let me just say - I loved it. I'm not one to laugh aloud, but it certainly amused me. I have ...

Good grief, Nu! Whatever happened to happiness - Kyle is like a freakopsychocreepyhooglyfranderburglarman - er, boy, that is. Ugh. Otherwise. Best. Thing. Ever. Jenny, Pierce, and the kid with the ...

Prok , you rock . Hey, it rhymes! And that might've been the only reason I said it. Eheh. xP Thank you for the nitpicks, and for the advice - ...